Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.
Dear Sir/Madam
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. I am writing this
letter to inform you with regard to the problem i
have experienced about Change the capitalization
I
current
situation of the Add an article
the current
road
in front of my house.
To begin
with, I am Ihsan Hidayat who lives in the
Block 04 of Melati Street. I Correct article usage
apply
have
moved here two weeks ago and Unnecessary verb
apply
find
the street damaged. Wrong verb form
found
i
have been waiting for the reparation, but Change the capitalization
I
i
Change the capitalization
I
did
not Verb problem
have
see
any act yet since the damage Wrong verb form
seen
of
the Change preposition
to
road
are
getting bigger all the time.
For the additional information, here are several Change the verb form
is
problem
with the Change to a plural noun
problems
road
that i
have found. The Change the capitalization
I
road
damage are
getting bigger as the trucks Change the verb form
is
passed
the Wrong verb form
pass
road
and made
the Wrong verb form
make
road
damage uncontrol. Furthermore
, this
made the road
cannot be used for the car, and it is only used for the bicycle and motorcycle
.
I am waiting for any Fix the agreement mistake
motorcycles
fyrther
action regarding Correct your spelling
further
this
problems
. Fix the agreement mistake
problem
i
cannot do my daily Change the capitalization
I
activity
properly if Fix the agreement mistake
activities
the
things Correct article usage
apply
happens
like Change the verb form
happen
this
way.
Thank you for your consideration in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon
Yours sincerely
IhsanSubmitted by patricius.yohanes on
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coherence cohesion
The letter could benefit from a clearer structure. For instance, merging related ideas into single sections could improve readability.
task achievement
Pay attention to some small grammatical errors such as 'i' should be capitalized to 'I' and 'reparation' should be 'repair'.
task achievement
You successfully mentioned your name and where you live at the beginning of the letter, providing clear context.
task achievement
You elaborated on the specific nature of the road's problems, providing clear detail.
coherence cohesion
You included a polite closing, which contributed to a suitable writing tone.
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