In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Artificial Intelligence is already dominating almost all fields around the world.
Driverless
vehicles
would be one of the aspects of technological advancements, which we could see in the near future, and these vehicles
would be responsible for carrying people
who are travelling from one place to another. In my opinion, the positives of this
would be more than the negatives that I will discuss in my essay.
The first and foremost benefit of driverless
cars would be less number of accidents
. We have seen that in many countries the percentage of accidents
is increasing every day, and this
leads to major injuries and an increased mortality rate. However
, automated vehicles
would be perfect for driving as there would not be any chance of drink and driving or any kind of negligence that would lead to deadly accidents
. For example
, in China, this
trend has already started, and there are so many metro trains which are driverless
. In addition
, this
would also
result in lower crime rates and more safety. There are so many cases in various countries where taxi or bus
drivers take advantage of passengers and indulge in crimes like stealing, robbery, and in fact rape. For instance
, in India in 2012, there was a case called Nirbhaya that happened on a bus
where the bus
driver raped a woman to death because she was alone on the bus
.
On the contrary
, if we talk about the drawbacks of driverless
vehicles
then
the main problem would be increased unemployment. When all vehicles
would drive from one place to another on their own then
they would be fully automated, which clearly shows that there would be no need for people
to drive them. For example
, many people
are employed as bus
, train, and taxi drivers which assist people
to commute, and this
way, they are earning money for survival. Unemployment would eventually lead to less consumerism and less economic growth.
In conclusion, although
driverless
cars have negatives like underemployment, I am still convinced that fewer accidents
and lower crime rates have more weight than drawbacks.Submitted by harleenarora620 on
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The essay presents a clear stance on the topic and addresses both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles, weighing them effectively to conclude that benefits outweigh drawbacks.
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