The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table gives a breakdown of consumer expenditure on different items in five different countries, namely Ireland, Italy,
Spain
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,
Sweden
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and
Turkey
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, in 2002.
Overall
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,
while
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Turkey
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was
a
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apply
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dominant
on
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in
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purchasing
for
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apply
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food, drinks, tobacco, education and leisure,
Sweden
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has
highest
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the highest
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rates in clothing and footwear. In terms of spending on food, drinks and tobacco,
Turkey
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has the largest proportion at 32,14%,
while
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the lowest rate was in
Sweden
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at 15.77%, which accounted just under half of the highest one, Ireland comes a close second to
Turkey
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’s rate (28,91%), Italy and
Spain
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had similar figures for
this
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spendings (16,36%, 18,80%). Regarding expenditure on clothing and footwear, the dominant country was Italy at 9,00%,
when
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while
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the minor proportion
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was
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Sweden
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at 5.40%. Other countries followed closely by each other ( Ireland 6,43%,
Spain
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6,51% and
Turkey
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6,63%).
In contrast
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, the smallest amounts of purchasing
was
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were
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in leisure and education. In
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Turkey
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Turkey,
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it was 4,35%, which is twice as much as in
Spain
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(1,98%).
Moreover
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, the percentage of Italy and
Sweden
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had a difference of 0,02% (3,20% and 3,22%).

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words spain, sweden, turkey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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