The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table gives information about how consumers in five different countries spent on items in 2002.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is clearly obvious that the Irish and Turkish spending on food, drinks and tobacco dominates some other countries, Linking Words
while
on the opposite side was Swedish. Linking Words
Additionally
, the citizens in Italy spent more on clothing and footwear Linking Words
while
people from Linking Words
Turkey
were leaders in spending on leisure and education.
The most spending on food and drinks was Use synonyms
Turkey
and Use synonyms
Ireland
with 32.14% and 28.91%, in Use synonyms
this
terms Spain spent 10% less than compared with Linking Words
Ireland
Use synonyms
while
people from Italy and Sweden were the Linking Words
last
on the list with 16.36% and 15.77%. Italian was the leader in spending on clothing and footwear with 9.00%, consumers from Linking Words
Ireland
, Spain and Use synonyms
Turkey
had the same percentage a little more than 6%, in Use synonyms
this
terms Swedish people were the most recent on the list with 5.40%. In the third category Linking Words
is
leisure and education, the average amount in the five countries is lower than other items. Unnecessary verb
apply
In particular
, Spain only spent 1.98%, Linking Words
Ireland
2.21% and approximately Use synonyms
moreover
3% spent by Italian and Swedish nations, Linking Words
Turkey
spent more compared with Use synonyms
other country
, probably 4%.Change the wording
another country
other countries
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