The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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The table gives information about how consumers in five different countries spent on items in 2002. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is clearly obvious that the Irish and Turkish spending on food, drinks and tobacco dominates some other countries,
while
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on the opposite side was Swedish.
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, the citizens in Italy spent more on clothing and footwear
while
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people from
Turkey
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were leaders in spending on leisure and education. The most spending on food and drinks was
Turkey
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and
Ireland
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with 32.14% and 28.91%, in
this
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terms Spain spent 10% less than compared with
Ireland
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while
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people from Italy and Sweden were the
last
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on the list with 16.36% and 15.77%. Italian was the leader in spending on clothing and footwear with 9.00%, consumers from
Ireland
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, Spain and
Turkey
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had the same percentage a little more than 6%, in
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terms Swedish people were the most recent on the list with 5.40%. In the third category
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leisure and education, the average amount in the five countries is lower than other items.
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, Spain only spent 1.98%,
Ireland
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2.21% and approximately
moreover
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3% spent by Italian and Swedish nations,
Turkey
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spent more compared with
other country
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, probably 4%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words turkey, ireland with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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