You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, members,costs

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to inquire about your

sports

club

, which I recently discovered through advertisements in the local broadsheet.

Initially

,let me introduce myself : My name is Jasmine. Recently,I have started a

course

at a

college

near your

sports

club

. I thought I would train after lessons in

sports

facilities.

However

was wondered

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due to

this

college

has no

sports

facilities of its own. I started a

course

this

college

because I thought it would have

sports

facilities.

Then

,I saw

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8 paragraphs

222 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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