You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, members,costs

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to inquire about your

sports

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club

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, which I recently discovered through advertisements in the local broadsheet.

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,let me introduce myself : My name is Jasmine. Recently,I have started a

course

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at a

college

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near your

sports

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club

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. I thought I would train after lessons in

sports

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facilities.

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was wondered

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due to

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this

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college

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has no

sports

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facilities of its own. I started a

course

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this

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college

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because I thought it would have

sports

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facilities.

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,I saw

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advertisements

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for

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your

sports

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club

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the broadsheet

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broadsheet

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and

fortunately

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it was near my

college

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. I was so glad that I

have

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found

private

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a private

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sports

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club

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. I

spent

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one part of my day in

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apply

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college

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and after

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the course

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course

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I need to relax. I do

sports

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for relaxing

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to relax

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. So, your

sports

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club

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is the best choice for me. I would like to know more about your

sports

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club

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. The number of members currently in the

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and the types of activities they typically do. I want to find a friend in your

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,I would like to know more about the costs

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your

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. Because these days I have some financial problems and I am afraid that I can not afford

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course

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Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Jasmine

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single idea per paragraph

Make sure to clearly separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs to enhance readability.

logical structure

Try to avoid minor grammatical errors to improve clarity and professionalism.

complete response

The introduction of yourself and the reason why you are interested in the sports club are clearly stated.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout.

greeting and closing

The letter starts with an appropriate greeting and closes with a polite farewell.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

222 words

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