The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now . summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now . summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate the main renovations which took place in the central library over 20 years ago. In general, it appears that the central library has become a more modern public area, with far more welfare services and facilities. The first change is that the reading chamber which includes gazettes and magazines replaced with a computer room and the place at the gate was remodeled.
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, 20 years ago in the south-east of the archives there used to be an enquiry desk that served people, now it has been replaced with a café.
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, In the middle of the archives used to be tables and chairs which have been removed and on both sides of the public area all adult fiction materials are demolished, and all reference resources are constructed.
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, on the east of space, there used to be adult non-functional books, but it flattened,
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adult fiction books and an information desk,
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self-service machines,
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self-service machines were built. Another striking remodel is that the children’s book was replaced with a lecture chamber, and the
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interesting reorganization is that the entertainment space which includes CDs, videos and computer games has been demolished, and two sofas, storytelling and children’s fiction bookshelves are set up.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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