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The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The table compares the information about the water expenditures spent in five different cities in Australia:
Adelaide
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, Brisbane,
Melbourne
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,
Perth
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, and
Sydney
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, indicated in Australian Dollars.
Overall
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, it can be clearly observed that the most expensive average bill per household found in
Perth
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,
whereas
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 that of in
Melbourne
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 was the cheapest comparing with the other given areas. It is understandable to see that the fee of water
usage
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 less than 125 kiloliter begin less than one dollars.
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, it is interesting to note that the
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 change per kiloliter when exceeding 125 kiloter is charged at different rate except the two major city:
Melbourne
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 and
Sydney
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.
To begin
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 with, it is obvious that the average charges per house hold in
Perth
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 was the greatest among the other four cities at $332, followed by
Sydney
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,
Adelaide
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, Brisbane, at $319, at $312, at $310, respectively.
Hence
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, that of in
Melbourne
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 paid average bill the least at only $253. In regards with, resident from
Adelaide
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 and
Perth
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 paid the fee of
usage
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 change per kiloliter of house hold fewer than certain limit the least at less than $0.5,
while
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 in
Sydney
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 paid the most at just below $1. Whatsmore, only those who live in
Melbourne
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 and
sydney
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 paid the same rate evenif they surpassed the certain amount of water
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. Whilst the other three cities charge differently in Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, and
Perth
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, in a range of $0.03 up to $1.08,
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adelaide, melbourne, perth, sydney, usage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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