Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how important New Year is to people in your country • describe how New Year is celebrated in your country • explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country
Dear Pedro
pedro
I was happy to receive your
request for assistance with your college project on New Change the capitalization
Pedro
Year
celebrations around the world. I'm pleased to share with you how New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
celebration is observe
in my country. On New Change the verb form
is observed
Year
's Eve, families and friends gather for a special dinner. Every year
I saw
traditional Wrong verb form
see
sald
, the Correct your spelling
salad
sald
name Correct your spelling
said
olivie
and Qashqadaryan Change the capitalization
Olivie
people
cooked
meat. Wrong verb form
cook
People
of
my country wait Change preposition
in
for
twelve at night because New Change preposition
until
Year
’s Eve came midnight twelve at.
At midnight, you will see a different color
in the sky Change the spelling
colour
because
fireworks .Add the preposition
because of
People
exchange warm wishes , kiss
, and different gifts . Everyone comes together to celebrate a shared experience, Fix the agreement mistake
kisses
learn
from our mistakes.
Someone creates a song for the new Correct word choice
and learn
year
and presents it to the public. Some people
promise themselves
to try to improve their lives in the new Correct pronoun usage
apply
year
.I hope this
information helps you with your project. If you have any problems, you can say it without shy
.Add a missing verb
being shy
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coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure by organizing the letter more clearly. For example, group related ideas into paragraphs and ensure there is a clear flow from one idea to the next.
task achievement
Ensure grammatical accuracy and fluency. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, word order, and sentence structure to make the letter easier to read.
task achievement
The letter adequately addresses each point in the task (importance of New Year, how it is celebrated, and what is liked about it).
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite