the maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

the maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
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The supplied maps illustrate the central part of Islip, a small city, right now and development plans.
Overall
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it is clear that
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Islip is going residential by building more houses and shops.
In addition
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, a dual carriageway will be built around the town. On the north of the map,
although
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the countryside will be demolished, they will build
instead
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of a two-lane highway, a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park.
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, a new housing area will be considered and it will connect with the main roadway by a side lane. In the centre area, the main avenue will be replaced with a pedestrian-only way, but the shops will remain steady. In the southern part, the areas of housing will be developed and more houses will be built.
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, the size of the park will be decreased. The school will experience no change, it is going to have a little change in internal instruction.
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, creating a dual carriageway around the town is the most major and significant change in the prediction plan for the future.
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