The table shows sources of student income over a ten-year period in the United Kingdom.

The table shows sources of student income over a ten-year period in the United Kingdom.
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The table graph illustrates the percentages of
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income from
student
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loans, Parental contribution, Grain, Earnings, and other sources in the UK over a ten-year period from 1988/99 to 1998/99. It is noticeable that all sources of
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salaries registered dramatic upward trends . Other profits,
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, were by far the most widespread revenue sources for students by the end of the span. In the year 1988/89 , the proportion of learner input from Grant was highest, consisting of 38% , which was 6% higher than that of Parental contribution, after which the former remained steady before decreasing sharply to 14% in the final year,
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the latter witnessed a sudden decline to 16% in 1998/99.
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, 6% of learner input came from Earnings, compared to 24% of the figure for other income in 1988/99. After that, there was a rapid rise to 14% in the level of Earnings, at which point it dropped slightly to 12% in 1998/99. A downward trajectory to 21% was seen in the share of other wages but
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went up to 34% in 1998/99. Another striking feature is that the statistic for
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loans was not present in 1988/89, following which the number grew to 34% in 1998/99.

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