The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003-2012.
The line graph illustrates the information regarding the
rate
of the change in Burglary, Use synonyms
Car
Use synonyms
theft
, Use synonyms
Robbery
in Manchester City Correct word choice
and Robbery
center
between 2003 and 2012.
Looking at the Change the spelling
centre
overall
structure, it is readily apparent that the Linking Words
car
Use synonyms
theft
crime Use synonyms
rate
was demonstrated by an upward indication over the period Use synonyms
while
the least indication was shown by Burglary.
Probably, it is mainly noticeable that in the initial year, the Burglary Linking Words
rate
was reached at the top range. Use synonyms
Then
Linking Words
this
indication fell severely Linking Words
up
from 2004 to 2012. Change preposition
apply
Besides
, the crime Linking Words
rate
of Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
theft
continued to rise significantly every year. After that, the Use synonyms
overall
Linking Words
of
robbery Change preposition
apply
rate
almost remained stable which Use synonyms
were
roughly 500.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
At the end
of the period, Linking Words
this
place becomes more stable Linking Words
with
Change preposition
in
the
some cases. Remove the article
apply
Car
Use synonyms
theft
crime has fluctuated, beginning from 2003 to the end of 2009 with above 2.000 and under 2.500. The numbers changed around 1.000 cases between 2009 and 2012.Use synonyms
Although
less a number of robberies than in any of the other crimes.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, car, theft with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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