The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries.

The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries.
The line graph compares the amount of clothing exported by three
countries
from 1999 to 2003.
Overall
, clothing
exports
from both
Colombia
and
Myanmar
had increased from their initial values by the end of the period shown. Japanese clothing
exports
,
on the other hand
, had slightly declined. Interestingly, Colombian and Japanese
exports
showed relatively small fluctuations from 1999-2003
whereas
exports
from
Myanmar
were extremely volatile. Looking in more detail, in 1999
Myanmar
exported approximately 5
million
dollars
of clothing compared to about 450
million
dollars
for
Colombia
and 575
million
for Japan.
However
, from 1999 to 2000
Myanmar
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Myanmar's
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clothing
exports
skyrocketed, surpassing both
countries
for a total of 800
million
dollars
’ worth. The relatively small gap between Japan and
Colombia
,
on the other hand
, narrowed even
further
with both
countries
exporting around 530
million
dollars
of clothes in 2000. From 2000,
Myanmar
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Myanmar's
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clothing
exports
continued to increase, reaching a peak value of 920
million
dollars
in 2001 before plummeting and
then
recovering slightly in 2003 for a final value of 400
million
, the lowest among the three
countries
.
Colombia
, having surpassed Japan in the period from 2000 to 2001, ended up with the highest total
exports
in 2003 at 600
million
dollars
.
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