In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.

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, whether to incorporate people with opposite opinions in discussions has been a contentious issue.
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it is important to integrate different ideas into current
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to provide a more comprehensive improvement, it is
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necessary to exchange ideas without aggressive gestures and improper manners. On one hand, listening to
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for
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opposers
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us to examine our proposition
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diversified angles, and can
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prove the viability and practicality of our practices.
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, when formulating laws, it is required to take
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from all political parties to make sure to consider all
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dimensions
of goods. If it is not comprehensive enough, it can result in
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in
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society
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and can lead to false
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.
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, it is important to remain rational and polite throughout the whole
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.
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people might be aligning with completely contrasting
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, it is still crucial to remember we are all making efforts towards building a better future and society.
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, when discussing whether the
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should be forbidden to
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under 10, supporters and opposers are likely to
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against each other's proposals,and argue over
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allow or to
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. Yet it is seldom remembered we are actually standing for the same value,
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, both looking for the best
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our future generations. Without consciously reminding ourselves, we can
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fall into the
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of failing to conduct effective conversations, and
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result in conflicts.
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, it is
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important to stick to the ongoing debate rather
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irrelevant issues.
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, in order to take in more
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dimensions
of considerations and form a
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strategy in any
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, it is important to incorporate people with
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contrasting
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point
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points
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of view.
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, it can allow us to examine our strategy
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different
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perspectives
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and
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make improvements.
However
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, it is
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important to keep rational and calm during the
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to avoid conflicts
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losing focus. It is important to
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strike
a balance between opinions from parties.
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