Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

While

it is widely claimed that

celebrities

yield more

money

than

politicians

, others argue that . Both

point

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of

views

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and reasons why I believe that it may result in a negative effect will be elaborated on in

this

essay.

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with, it may

seems

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sensible for some to believe that

celebrities

earn greater

money

due to

personally

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favouritism.

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is

possibly

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because monetary

supports

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support

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often

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as

symbol

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of affection from the fans in return

of

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the

entertaining

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they get. Unlike

politicians

, their role is clearly to serve the country rather than

seeking

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fame. People

viewed

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that the salary that

politicians

recieved

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receive

come

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from taxes we

paid

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and

that is

no wonder why they gain

fewer

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money

. Many opponents of

this

idea might

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that the popularity of renowned

peoples

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people

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than

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politician

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politicians

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could bring a benefit

toward

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the country.

To simply

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explain, they could be a soft power for one's nation to spread its culture and

improving

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its economics. Take Korea,

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;

due to

k-drama

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and

k-pop

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that

distributed

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globally nowadays,

a

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well-known

korean

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celebrities

result in numerous trends and activities that make its nation become popular in today's world.

However

, I personally argue in favour of maleficent development seeing that

celebrities

as you might

supports

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. It is understandable that

the

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celebrities

often

neglects

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when it comes to bank statement checking

while

for

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politician

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politicians

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it is

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much emphasis on that.

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, a former member of

korean

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a

famous boy band, Seungri, who accused of prostitution. In summary,

althought

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although

it is undeniable that

celebrities

gaining more

money

than

politicians

could lead

both

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good and bad development

toward

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the

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society, I am of the opinion that its detrimental outcomes

outweight

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outweigh

its beneficial effects.