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The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The two tables compare the population of international recruitment seeking education in
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USA
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the USA
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 and
Canada
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 in the consecutive years 2002 and 2003.
Overall
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, the
students
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 came from three different backgrounds, they are either Indian, or Chinese, or they are exchange
students
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 between
Canada
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 and the
USA
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. The foreign
students
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 in the
USA
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 exceeded half a million
students
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 in both years,
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 in
Canada
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 it was just slightly over 70000,
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,
Canada
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 experienced the highest rate of growth of the foreign student population.
While
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Canada
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 witnessed a 17% increase in admissions in 2003, the
USA
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 remained nearly plateaued with only 2% more
students
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.
This
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 can be explained by the influx of
students
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 coming from China to join Canadian institutions.
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, The year 2003 witnessed a decrease in the number of Indian
students
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 in the
USA
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 which dropped by 9%,
in contrast
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 to the 35% increase in
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 population going to
Canada
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, canada, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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