The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The two tables compare the population of international recruitment seeking education in
USA
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and
Canada
in the consecutive years 2002 and 2003.
Overall
, the
students
came from three different backgrounds, they are either Indian, or Chinese, or they are exchange
students
between
Canada
and the
USA
. The foreign
students
in the
USA
exceeded half a million
students
in both years,
while
in
Canada
it was just slightly over 70000,
nevertheless
,
Canada
experienced the highest rate of growth of the foreign student population.
While
Canada
witnessed a 17% increase in admissions in 2003, the
USA
remained nearly plateaued with only 2% more
students
.
This
can be explained by the influx of
students
coming from China to join Canadian institutions.
Also
, The year 2003 witnessed a decrease in the number of Indian
students
in the
USA
which dropped by 9%,
in contrast
to the 35% increase in
this
population going to
Canada
.
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