The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays the profits year on year of
Amandine
Bakery
, Mary Bakeshop and,
Bolo
Cakery between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, Mary Bakeshop had started the period with the highest earnings and finished with the lowest.
Amandine
Bakery
and
Bolo
Cakery started with lower earnings but, ended up with higher
gains
, being
Amandine
Bakery
with the highest
gains
and
Bolo
was the second one. Mary Bakeshop was the most popular
bakery
in 2000 and 2002 with earnings hovering just below $10000, since 2004 its
gains
dramatically dropped reaching the lowest income at $4000.
Bolo
Cakery, started the period with the lowest incomes, since 2002 their
gains
went up just over $4000 and kept remained until 2007 when the incomes started to go up reaching nearly $6000 in 2010.
Amandine
Bakery
started just below $6000 in 2000 and remained until 2005 when the
gains
abruptly grew, reaching just over $10000 throughout the years.
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