The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays the profits year on year of
Amandine
Bakery
, Mary Bakeshop and, Bolo
Cakery between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, Mary Bakeshop had started the period with the highest earnings and finished with the lowest. Amandine
Bakery
and Bolo
Cakery started with lower earnings but, ended up with higher gains
, being Amandine
Bakery
with the highest gains
and Bolo
was the second one.
Mary Bakeshop was the most popular bakery
in 2000 and 2002 with earnings hovering just below $10000, since 2004 its gains
dramatically dropped reaching the lowest income at $4000.
Bolo
Cakery, started the period with the lowest incomes, since 2002 their gains
went up just over $4000 and kept remained until 2007 when the incomes started to go up reaching nearly $6000 in 2010. Amandine
Bakery
started just below $6000 in 2000 and remained until 2005 when the gains
abruptly grew, reaching just over $10000 throughout the years.Submitted by daniruspi on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amandine, bakery, bolo, gains with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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