The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map gives us information about changes in the
city
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of Nelson between the year 2000 and the present. As you can
see
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see,
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there are more constructions today than in the 2000s.
the
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city
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has grown in commerce and services. In the 2000s, the
City
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Centre
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was in the middle of the
city
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. To the north of the
City
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Centre
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, the University of Nelson and a park with trees to the east of the University were . To the northwest of the
city
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Centre
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, there was a train station, and to the
west
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west,
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an old market. The main road
the
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port
and
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, and
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the river were located in the south of the
city
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. Nowadays, there are a lot of new buildings, facilities and services resulting in great development for the
city
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’s economy. Today,
The
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City
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Centre
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has a service for rental bikes, to the
north
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north,
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there is a new train station and a train line to connect downtown with the educational institutions. To the north, the house of studies is still there
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however
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, a hall of residences and a Shopping
Centre
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have been built on each side. To the west of the
City
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Centre
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Centre,
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there is a new shop and a new market to the east. To the south, the road is now for pedestrians
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, and
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the port has new restaurants
bars
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, bars
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and clubs.

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