The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The map gives us information about changes in the
city
of Nelson between the year 2000 and the present. As you can see there are more constructions today than in the 2000s. the
city
has grown in commerce and services. In the 2000s, the
City
Centre
was in the middle of the
city
. To the north of the
City
Centre
, the University of Nelson and a park with trees to the east of the University were there. To the northwest of the
city
Centre
, there was a train station, and to the west an old market. The main road the port and the river were located in the south of the
city
. Nowadays, there are a lot of new buildings, facilities and services resulting in a great development to the
city
’s economy. The
City
Centre
has now a service for rental bikes, to the north there is a new train station and a train line to connect downtown with the educational institution. To the north, the house of studies is still there,
however
, a hall of residences and a Shopping
Centre
have been built on each side. To the west of the
City
Centre
Add a comma
Centre,
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there is a new shop and a new market to the east. To the south, the road is now for pedestrians and the port has now new restaurants bars and clubs.
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