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The table below shows the results of survey of first-vear students who take courses in a particular university

The table below shows the results of survey of first-vear students who take courses in a particular university
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The chart presents information about the surveyed data of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in 2000, 2005 and 2010. The units are given in percentage.
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, what stands out from the chart is that the proportion of pupils having good results in buildings/teaching facilities in all
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 given was similar.
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, in 2005, the highest ratio was recorded in print resources. Looking at the figures in
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 detail, it can be noticed that the percentage of students who got
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high marks in print resources in three surveyed years dominated the other fields, ranging from about 84 to 89.
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, the outcomes of individuals giving good ratings for teaching quality in 2000 and 2005 doubled those of that in
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 of modules offered in the same period, witnessing approximately 65,69 compared to 32, 30 respectively. Turning
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 the remaining statistic, it can be observed that the figure for buildings/ teaching facilities was unchanged in all time given, accounting for around 77.
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, electronic
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 pupils who received the high results had
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 far distance
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each year. It can be seen that in 2000, it was only
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 at nearly 45, but in the next 10 years, those data were doubled compared to in the past, stood at 88.
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