You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The two pie charts provide an overview of the marital status of the populations in
Canada
and Australia
.
In Canada
, the majority of the population, 53%, is separated but not divorced, indicating a high rate of marital separation. This
contrasts with Australia
, where 46% of the population is married, suggesting a higher stability in marital relationships. The proportion of married individuals
in Canada
is lower at 29%, reflecting the higher separation rate.
Regarding individuals
who have never married, Canada
has a slightly higher percentage at 7%, compared to 6% in Australia
. The percentage of widowed individuals
is also
marginally higher in Canada
(7%) than in Australia
(5%).
One significant difference is in the category of same-sex marriage, which is present in Canada
at 3%, but not recorded in Australia
. This
highlights a potential difference in the recognition or reporting of same-sex marriages between the two countries.
The percentage of divorced individuals
is relatively close, with Australia
at 6% and Canada
at 7%. These figures suggest that divorce rates are somewhat similar, though slightly higher in Canada
.
Overall
, the marital status distribution in Canada
shows a higher incidence of separation without divorce, whereas
Australia
has a greater proportion of married individuals
. The presence of same-sex marriage in Canada
but not in Australia
is also
a noteworthy distinction. Despite these differences, both countries have comparable figures for never married
, widowed, and divorced populations.Verb problem
never-married
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