The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
#numbers #visitors #ashdown #museum #year #show #surveys #visit #two #periods #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The table illustrates many visitors who come to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after renovation. The pie charts depict the consequence of surveys about the measure of their satisfaction with their visit in the same two periods.
Overall
, there is an increase in the rate of visitors after the refurbishment of the table. Many people
are satisfied with the changes after renovation,as well as
other individuals commented very satisfied after visiting the museum.
According to
the table, before refurbishment, the number of visitors was 74,000 and about 20,000 people
would be added after visiting there. So, fortunately, the improvement works.
By looking into the details of the pie charts, before refurbishment, just 40% of people
were dissatisfied with that situation and one-third of individuals were satisfied. Of course, these values have changed dramatically after repair. The ‘Dissatisfied’ item decreased significantly by 25% but the Satisfied people
increased by 10%. To compare the ‘very satisfied’ item, it has a growing rate of 20% rather than before restoration. Moreover
, 5% of people
do not respond either before the upgrade or after that.Submitted by brightstargalaxy on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼