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The graph below shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

The graph below shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.
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The given graph presents the figure for participants in 4 different
sports
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 in a specific area from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
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, it can be seen that all the
sports
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 categories had an upward trend with the exception of tennis.
Additionally
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, badminton and basketball had a similar pattern throughout the timeframe. For
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three
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 of the four given
sports
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, a rise can be noted.
Initially
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, about 150
people
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 started playing tennis in 1995 and
then
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 its figure moderately increased to over 200
people
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 after a decade.
Subsequently
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, it gradually climbed to nearly 250
peole
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people
 in 2005. Regarding the remaining mentioned categories, the same trend was seen
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 them with basketball's number
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 for around 70
people
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 in 1985 and slightly went up to exactly 100
people
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 in the final year, that of badminton was lower as it was just over 50
people
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 beginning to participate in
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sports
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 in 1985 and slowly went an up path to under 65
people
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 in 2005, respectively. Turning to the
last
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 kind of
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, where basketball stood out
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 chart as there
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 approximately 250 participants at its first appearance in 1985. After that, the statistic was equal to that of tennis in 1995, presenting 250
people
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,
then
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 decreased to nearly 200
people
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 after 5 years. At the final point, it significantly went down five times and
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 at more than 60
people
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 ending the timeframe.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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