The table illustrates the predicted costing over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. While the pie chart shows the projectured expenditure breakdown allocation for the only first year as the projects are set up.

The table illustrates the predicted costing over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. While the pie chart shows the projectured expenditure breakdown allocation for the only first year as the projects are set up.
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the estimated spending for 3 different forestation plans during a 5-
year
period,
whereas
details of how the money will be spent in the
first
year
are reported in the pie chart.
Overall
, it can be seen that even though the plan of the Asia region is going to climb throughout the timeline, other nations' expenditures will decrease.
Additionally
,
while
staff's salaries make up the most of the costs in the
first
year
, training and office expenses are in the likelihood the least. Regarding the table where West Africa and Central America's green projects are planned to cost about 10.5 and 20
million
dollars
when they
first
start. As for Africa, its expenses are going to drop to just nearly a quarter of the
first
year
by
year
3 before having a slight increase of 1
million
dollars
at the
last
stage.
Likewise
, the project of Central America will have a significant reduction in costs to 12
million
dollars
after a
year
and to 5
million
dollars
after another
year
which was
also
its plateau for the rest of the timeframe. In terms of Southeast Asia, it is projected to be the most expensive plan among these 3 regions with a considerably increasing cost from roughly 30
million
dollars
to 50
million
dollars
eventually. Looking at the table half of
year
1' spending is on salaries,
whereas
the put-up costs are going to be around 20% lower.
By contrast
, training and office fees are likely to share an identical sum of approximately 10%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Projected costing
  • Sustainable forestry
  • Environmental projects
  • Expenditure breakdown
  • Financial commitment
  • Allocation of funds
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Deforestation
  • Technological advancements
  • Policy changes
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