The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives a detailed breakdown in metric
tons
of how much fish
was caught locally and how much was imported over a ten year
period in Perth, Australia.
There was a considerably larger volume of locally caught Add a hyphen
ten-year
fish
than imported fish
over the entire period. This
volume of locally caught fish
increased dramatically in the first four years before peaking in 2008 at 8136.2 metric tons
and then
decreasing every year after that, although
it did recover slightly in the final year to 5031.9 tons
.
With regards to levels of imported fish
there was much more fluctuation than with locally caught, ranging from 231.6 Add a comma
fish,
tons
in 2005 to 1227.3 tons
in 2012. However
, the overall
trend shows an increase over the period with considerably more fish
being supplied internationally.
Overall
, we can see that Perth was not very reliant on imported fish
and was able to provide a large amount domestically. When looking at total volumes of fish
, we can see that amounts increased until 2009 and then
dropped off. However
, Perth seems to be more reliant on fish
imports than in the past.Submitted by [email protected] on
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