The maps show a present lay out of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The maps show a present lay out of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show a present lay out of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.
The floor maps illustrate the design of the building of the
office
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in the present day and the blueprint for redevelopment.
Overall
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, a noticeable transformation is
due to
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be made to add more facilities and more space,
while
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the biggest change is that the
office
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room
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was reduced for kitchen and canteen.
Additionally
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, the west entrances and store
room
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remained unchanged.
To begin
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with, the four
office
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rooms in the south will combine into the bigger
office
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room
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and the south entrances will be moved to the centre between the two
office
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rooms. Moving onto the east grass will be removed to place the coffee machine in the northeast and a new meeting area and some chairs will be placed in the southeast.
Additionally
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, WCs will be moved to the top right corner. Turning into details, in the north two
office
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rooms will be replaced by the kitchen and canteen.
In addition
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, the store
room
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will be removed to place outdoor seating area and some chairs in there. The entrance to go to it will have remained untouched.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".
Vocabulary: Replace the words office, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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