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the chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with car in one European country between 1971 and 2001

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The bar chart delineates the alterations in the proportion of possessing cars
families
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 in a specific country in Europe from 1971 to 2001.
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, all
households
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 were on the rise throughout the surveyed period, with the exception of no-car
families
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. Notably,
while
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households
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 without cars were consistently the leading between 1971 and 1981, it was overtaken by one-car
families
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 in 1991.
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 the percentage of
households
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 without a car in
this
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 country declined from 50% to just over 40% in the first ten years, it remained at the highest figure in
this
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 period before dropping to only 30% in 1991. After that, the statistics levelled off at around 30% until 2001. Regarding the rate of one-car
families
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, it initiated at around 38% before shooting up to 48% in 1991 and superseding the figure of no-car
families
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 to rank first in the chart. Despite a minor drop to roughly 43% by 2001, it remained the greatest proportion through the timescale. Meanwhile,
households
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 with two cars showed more volatility. The percentage grew from under 20% in 1971 to nearly 30% in 1981.
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, it went down to exactly 20% in 1991, followed by another increase to around 30% in the year 2001, when it equalled the proportion of no-car
families
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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