The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011

The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011
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Contained in the pie charts is data pertaining to various kinds of trash in a nation from 1960 to 2011.
Overall
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, the
waste
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disposal of paper was higher than any other category in 1960, before being taken over
this
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position by
food
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in 2011. It is
also
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noted that green
waste
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and glass remained constant throughout the years. Taking a closer look at the paper in
further
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detail, it is apparent that its'
waste
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was disposed
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at 25%, nearly doubled that of
food
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at 12% in the first year.
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, the figure for paper decreased to 15%
while
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food
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climbed to 21%, replacing the dominant position in rubbish disposal. With respect to the section other,
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percentage witnessed a decline to 4% from 12%.
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, the figure for textiles went down between 17% and 11%. Moving onto
food
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and metal, these proportions stood at 12% and 8%, before rising to 21% and 9%, respectively. The same trend was true for plastic and wood, those figures both doubled from 8% and 4% to 18% and 8% in that order.
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, green
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and glass still stabilized at 9% and 5% over the years of the timeframe.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, food with synonyms.
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