Every year more students to study online rather than attend classes on campus What you think the causes of this trends?What are the solution for that

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students
would
sooner
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rather
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study online than study on
campus
. One of the main
reason
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reasons
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of
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for
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that is
easier accessibility and another one is
cost
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the cost
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of these kinds of
classes
. To encourage
students
to attend
classes
on
campus
,
cost
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the cost
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of online
classes
should be increased,
also
, some facilities should be provided for
students
on
campus
. Nowadays,
Students
would rather have free conditions to pursue their academic tasks. Online
courses
align with
this
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these
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conditions and pupils can watch different
courses
online everywhere and
everytime
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.
In addition
, they are not forced to do their homework at a certain time and can make plans freely.
Moreover
, plenty of online
courses
are free or their
cost
is lower than
in person
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in-person
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classes
.
This
reason can act as a catalyst for
students
to attend online
classes
because the majority of
students
are concerned about
this
classes
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expenditure.
For example
, many
courses
exist
in
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on
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different platforms like Coursera or Udemy which have
same
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syllabous
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syllabi
as the university
courses
that
student
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students
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afford less than
campus
courses
and sometimes they are free. To tackle
this
issue,
institute
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should increase
cost
of the online
classes
. academic organizations can do that because not only is the accessibility to online
courses
unlimited, but
also
students
can attend these
courses
easily
everytime
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every time
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and everywhere that they want.
Furthermore
, universities should provide some features that
these
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apply
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can not be provided in online
courses
. Many
students
need different facilities and options including experimental tools to pursue
thier
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their
major and if campuses provide them can encourage
students
to attend
campus
courses
.
For instance
, many universities in the UK provide laptops for
students
in order to conduct research,
also
, universities try to provide some summer
classes
and internships in order
to
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students
be familiar with
industry
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the industry
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. In conclusion,
due to
students
can access online
courses
easier
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more easily
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and
they
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apply
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pay less money for these
courses
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courses,
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they would rather attend online
classes
instead
of
campus
classes
. To address
this
issue,
rising
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the rising
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cost
of online
classes
and preparing some
aminities
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amenities
in
campus
classes
can be effective solutions.
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