As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In
this
modern world, the popularity of newspapers
is fading due to
the alteration of internet access and more and more people are choosing to use it wisely anytime and anywhere. From my perspective, I completely agree with the statement for some specific reasons and examples.
To begin
with, online websites and newspapers
namely politics, wars, and inflaction
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inflation
inflexion
provides
us with fresh news Change the verb form
provide
on-
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on time
time
daily and we all can read or watch it by clicking only one button so we can learn more about boundaries and explore more about the factors above. Furthermore
, we do not have to pay extra money for its quality and paper. For example
, BBC(British Broadcasting Channel) does not insist us
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we
to
pay fees necessarily and just Fix the infinitive
apply
let
us read all Correct subject-verb agreement
lets
newspapers
online on
the Change preposition
at
time
and it allows us to access it
anytime without any Correct pronoun usage
them
distruction
.
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destruction
Secondly
, paper-based newspapers
used to play an important role in the earlier time
as it is only key to Fix the agreement mistake
times
learn
more about Wrong verb form
learning
world
. Add an article
the world
However
, as time
goes
by, since the internet was created, everything shifted to Wrong verb form
went
phone
and people stopped consuming paper-based Fix the agreement mistake
phones
newspapers
because they do
not have to bring Wrong verb form
did
such
a big paper
everywhere they Correct quantifier usage
piece of paper
go
when they Wrong verb form
went
have
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had
internet
and mobile phone. Correct article usage
the internet
For instance
, printing newspapers
needs tons of papers which undoubtedly lead manufacturers to cut down more and more trees to harm nature. Also
, they do not provide us with fresh news because it takes so long to print them and deliver at
the exact Correct pronoun usage
them at
time
. Thanks to broadcasting live streamers for providing us with fresh new
.
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news
To conclude
, however
live-streaming news and fresh newspapers
provide us a
lot of benefits with Add the preposition
with a
its
quality, Correct pronoun usage
their
newspapers
cannot correspond.Submitted by nazim200709 on
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language
Work on grammatical accuracy and lexical resource to ensure a higher band score. For example, use 'inflation' instead of 'inflaction', and 'disruption' instead of 'distruction'.
examples
Ensure that the examples provided are detailed and varied to effectively support the main points. For example, provide more diverse examples for both the positive impact of online news and the environmental benefits.
structure
Improve the logical structure by ensuring each paragraph flows smoothly into the next. Use clear connectors and transitions like 'Moreover', 'Additionally', and 'In contrast' to improve coherence.
task response
The essay demonstrates a clear understanding of the topic and provides a complete response to the question, addressing how the internet influences the decline of newspapers.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are well-presented and contribute to a coherent argument throughout the essay.
task response
Main points are generally well-supported with relevant examples, making the essay informative and engaging.