A museum near your home is looking for people to do unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntery work at the museum. write a letter to the museum director to apply for the volunteer work in your letter explain why ou want to do voluntary work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
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email finds you well, I am writing
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letter regarding the voluntary
work
at the museum. I
have
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heard about
this
great opportunity two days ago from a friend of mine. I really hope that you are still looking for
a
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participants. I am a fresh graduate student from
university
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, and I have a huge free time that I can invest
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something
benefical
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beneficial
.
Therefore
, I am eager to
work
at the museum as
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an 'orgnisitional'
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orgnisitional
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organisational
'. I can
work
in organising the visitors in
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manner. I am sure that my great skills in
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organisation
, leadership,
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mangemengt
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management
, would be helpful in being very
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qualified
for
this
application.As well, I have
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prior experience since
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days in working as
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orgnisitional
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organisational
". I am
avaliable
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available
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work
from
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3 p.m
untill
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until
10 p.m except
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weekend days. looking to hear from you, Thank you for considering my
applicition
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application
. NOUF MUT.
Regrds
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Regards
,
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Proofread your work to correct spelling mistakes (e.g., 'benefical' should be 'beneficial', 'quilfied' should be 'qualified', etc.).
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Be clear and specific about the volunteer role you are interested in; 'organisitional' is not a defined term.
coherence cohesion
Improve transitions between paragraphs for better flow and coherence.
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Use appropriate paragraphing to separate different ideas clearly.
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Consider using a more formal conclusion, such as 'Yours sincerely,' or 'Best regards,' followed by your full name.
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The tone of the letter is polite and professionally appropriate for a job application.
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The letter contains all the necessary information: why you want to volunteer, your skills, and your availability.

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