People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, watching entertaining programs without having company is more likely to be selected.

This

could increase one's personal

freedom

and

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its focus. Despite the positives of consuming the contents alone, the loss of collective experience has become a concern for contrast people.

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,

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essay will prove the benefits

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can outweigh the

setback

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. One significant positive of watching movies alone is embracing the

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of choosing the film genre. Having to compromise the viewing preferences with others to find the right one is

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challenge for

ones

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.

Consequently

, the

freedom

of selecting the movie so people can watch what they want without having to negotiate with others is a privilege of

freedom

.

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Furthermore

, it

also

allows individuals to fully immerse in the content. It could

leads

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them to a deeper understanding and appreciation of the material.

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,

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romantic movie

enthusiast

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can enjoy consuming all the content without compromising any judgement from other people.

As a result

,

this

also

improve

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their focus through critically analysing the context.

While

diving into movies by ourselves

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a few

positives effect

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, simultaneously it will affect our social connection with others. The communal aspect of watching television and films, which can lead to discussions and shared laughter or emotions, may be diminished.

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,

ones

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could prevent

this

by spending their time with friends and

bring

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the topic of film that they have already watched.

Therefore

, it combines the pros and the

con

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. In conclusion, the impacts of indulging

into

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movies without having anyone to accompany

are

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more beneficial. Raising

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personal

freedom

as well as

increasing our focus level are two of them.

Although

at the same

time

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it will disconnect us

with

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partners or family to share

emotion

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, we could overcome

this

issue

with

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sharing the topic of the latest film

to

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our relatives.