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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the volume of people in six different
countries
 living outside their motherland and the total in each group in the year 2011.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the number of German citizens
come
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 in first place
while
Poland
 is in final place.
Moreover
, people from other
countries
 except
Poland
 itself tend to live in Polish and a few individuals settle in
Spain
.
To begin
 with, looking at the total volume of residents, Germany occupied a gigantic 1,198,000 followed by Great Britain with an enormous 1,037,000.
Spain
 was in the third rank and registered well over a massive 860,000;
besides
, Italy and
Poland
 accounted for a meagre 196,000 and a minuscule 6,000. What is interesting to note is a significant difference was seen between
Spain
 and Italy which was approximately 7 times.
On the other hand
, the total of residents living in other
countries
 was highest in
Poland
, at 1,168,000, and half of them were from the UK.
In addition
, German people tended to choose Italy as their destination,
occupied
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 556,000.
Last
 but not least,
Spain
 had individuals from other
countries
 the least and they were from
Poland
 around a nominal 170. What is surprising to see is that residents who lived in Italy, which were roughly 863,670, were from Germany more than half.
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