The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994
The pie chart illustrates information about the amount of whom the persons are captured and the bar chart shows the reason why they were captured in the
last
five years. From an
overall
perspective, it can be clearly seen that the highest proportion of the rate of
boy
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arrested is 32% over the period given,
while
the lowest percentage of the arrested by females is 9%, the other standard is not arrested 68% man and 91% women. Looking at the bar chart in more detail, in the reasons for most recent arrests between the females and
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.
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, the most
reason
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for women is public drinking proportion
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38% the other hand 30% for men.
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the low rate
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no answer, a drunk driving the male's percentage is higher than the females in proportion 13%. For assault and other
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, it is almost the same rate.
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, the father
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the highest estimate in the most standard.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Incarceration
  • Proportion
  • Pie chart
  • Bar chart
  • Demographic data
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Correctional facilities
  • Legislation
  • Criminal justice system
  • Crime rate
  • Felony
  • Misdemeanor
  • Recidivism
  • Deterrence
  • Rehabilitation
  • Policy makers
  • Law enforcement agencies
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