The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994
The pie chart illustrates information about the amount of whom the persons are captured and the bar chart shows the reason why they were captured in the
last
five years.
From an overall
perspective, it can be clearly seen that the highest proportion of the rate of boy
arrested is 32% over the period given, Fix the agreement mistake
boys
while
the lowest percentage of the arrested by females is 9%, the other standard is not arrested 68% man and 91% women.
Looking at the bar chart in more detail, in the reasons for most recent arrests between the females and guy
. Fix the agreement mistake
guys
However
, the most reason
for women is public drinking proportion Correct word choice
common reason
to
38% the other hand 30% for men. Change preposition
apply
Also
the low rate Add a comma
Also,
with
no answer, a drunk driving the male's percentage is higher than the females in proportion 13%. For assault and other Change preposition
of
reason
, it is almost the same rate.
Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
to sum up
, the father have
the highest estimate in the most standard.Change the verb form
has
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