The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now.
Contained in the two demographics is the information pertaining to the alternatives which have occurred in Pebbleton village from two decades ago up until the current day. In general, the village has seen a visible change
to add
different amenities, houses and infrastructure for villagers. Change preposition
by adding
However
, school
, lighthouse, trees and playing field have remained unchanged Correct article usage
the school
while
old
fort and film studio have been removed.
Beginning with the north side of Correct article usage
the old
peninsula
, the line of houses has extended along the coastline. Add an article
the peninsula
Additionally
, old
fort has been replaced with Add an article
the old
children's
playground Correct article usage
a children's
while
film
studio has been repurposed Correct article usage
the film
to
the flats. The Change preposition
into
walk
path has been stretched to the Change the verb form
walking
South land
, beside the appearance of facilities between the footpath which is parallel.
Turning to the eastern half of the peninsula, Correct your spelling
Southland
school
and trees have not been touched. Another worthy point is Old Fort Road and Fix the agreement mistake
schools
roundabout
running parallel to the coastal road have Correct article usage
the roundabout
been remained
with the Change to the active voice
remained
light house
and playing field Correct your spelling
lighthouse
have
seen no change in two decades.Change the verb form
has
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