The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now.

Contained in the two demographics is the information pertaining to the alternatives which have occurred in Pebbleton village from two decades ago up until the current day. In general, the village has seen a visible change

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different amenities, houses and infrastructure for villagers.

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school

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the school

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, lighthouse, trees and playing field have remained unchanged

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old

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fort and film studio have been removed. Beginning with the north side of

peninsula

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, the line of houses has extended along the coastline.

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old

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fort has been replaced with

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playground

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film

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studio has been repurposed

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the flats. The

walk

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path has been stretched to the

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, beside the appearance of facilities between the footpath which is parallel. Turning to the eastern half of the peninsula,

school

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and trees have not been touched. Another worthy point is Old Fort Road and

roundabout

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running parallel to the coastal road have

been remained

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with the

light house

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lighthouse

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and playing field

have

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seen no change in two decades.

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The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now.

some people believe that that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays many young people are attracted to dangerous sport such as snowboarding or mountain biking. What makes these sports so attractive? What measures should be taken to minimize the risks?

In some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.