The chart below shows information about animals at various nature reserves in 2010.

The chart below shows information about animals at various nature reserves in 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows information about animals at various nature reserves in 2010.
The graph depicts how many
zebras
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and
buffaloes
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were kept in four different
nature
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reserves in 2010. In general, it is evident that
buffaloes
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outnumbered
zebras
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in most
nature
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reserves except Bukit Timah which bucked the trend. Another noteworthy observation is that Beachwood was home to the highest
number
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of animals. It is
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noticeable that the figures for
zebras
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and
buffaloes
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kept in Cape
Nature
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were relatively similar. Looking at the graph in detail, Beachwood ranked first with the highest
number
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of animals kept here, with 83
zebras
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and 120
buffaloes
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. Klipriviersberg ranked second and it was home to 70
zebras
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and 115
buffaloes
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. In terms of Cape
Nature
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, the
number
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of
buffaloes
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was only slightly higher than that of
zebras
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, at 81 and 78 respectively. Regarding the remaining
nature
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reserve with a different pattern, Bukit Timah.
While
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there were 58
zebras
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kept here, the figure for
buffaloes
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was much lower, at 40
buffaloes
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. Noticeably, Bukit Timah was
also
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home to the least
number
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of animals among the four reserves under study.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words zebras, buffaloes, nature, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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