Some say that
produceWrong verb form
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large quantities of money as
weelCorrect your spelling
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as having small intervals of
time
betterAdd a missing verb
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than earning less
of Change preposition
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cash
with more
leisure
time
.
This
essay will discuss both of
Correct article usage
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viewFix the agreement mistake
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of a
coupleAdd the preposition
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cases above with qualities or quantities relaxation periods and more or less
cash
on hand.
It is true having
a Remove the article
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capital on
highCorrect article usage
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range
makeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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individuals more enjoying their lives
despiteCorrect quantifier usage
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haveChange the verb form
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lowCorrect article usage
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range of
leisure
time
.
Moreover
, it can make them
to Change the verb form
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book
to
foreignAdd an article
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country and
stayingWrong verb form
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for several days and
makeVerb problem
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luxuriousCorrect article usage
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experience there.
For instance
, my friend has only 14 days per year relaxating
because he spends more
time
to workChange the verb form
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in
to lead their skill to higher steps despite he has high income than
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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hasCorrect subject-verb agreement
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little timework
onChange preposition
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their lives. As
theCorrect article usage
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result, he is the happiest
menFix the agreement mistake
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surrounding their area and has a high quality of
vocationsFix the agreement mistake
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because he
earningWrong verb form
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largeCorrect word choice
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of Change preposition
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cash
than others, even
theirCorrect word choice
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time
is limited.
On the other hand
, people
also
believe
hasWrong verb form
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less
of Change preposition
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cash
with more
leisure
time
is better than
oppositeCorrect article usage
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because able to
stress risk
due to
highCorrect article usage
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of
.
For instance
, in Indonesia who
are Unnecessary verb
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choose to
their
time
work even earning less money,
however
,
Correct pronoun usage
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hasCorrect subject-verb agreement
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a large relaxation daysCorrect the article-noun agreement
a large relaxation day
large relaxation days
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isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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happier than
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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hasCorrect subject-verb agreement
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a big income and less free
time
because, they
haveVerb problem
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a
biggerCorrect word choice
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stress experience caused by pressure from their occupation,
therefore
, Indonesian peoples more choose large
leisure
time
as weel as have less of
cash
than opposite.
In conclusion, I personally
thingCorrect your spelling
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that
haveWrong verb form
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more
cash
evenCorrect word choice
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lessChange the quantifier
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relaxation periods is better than
oppositeCorrect article usage
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. The important is how to organize our income to utilize small periods of
leisure
to make unforgettable memories with
cashCorrect article usage
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we own.