The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
Contained in the bar charts is information pertaining to the
price
of airline tickets from Sydney
and Melbourne
and vice versa over two
weeks in 2013.
Overall
, the price
of tickets for the flights between two
cities wịtnessed a fluctuation before ultimately decreasing to the same figures by the end of the timeframe. Additionally
, the price
of tickets from Sydney
to Melbourne
experienced the most significant changes during the period.
Looking at the cost of an airplane
ticket between Change the spelling
aeroplane
Sydney
and Melbourne
in further
detail, the price
on Monday of the first week
stood at $80 and subsequently
declined to exactly $40 on Tuesday
. On the following two
days, the figure was recorded at approximately $70 before dropping to $50 and remaining steady until the first day of week
two
. Between Tuesday
and Thursday of week
two
, the price
fluctuated slightly, ranging from nearly $35 to $40. The price
then
increased sharply to around $80 before decreasing again to $50 on Sunday.
Turning to the remaining chart, which indicated the flight from Melbourne
to Sydney
, the cost began at $60 that
was $20 lower than the reverse flight. Correct pronoun usage
which
Similarly
, the data also
decreased on Tuesday
and remained steady until Thursday at approximately $35. Subsequently
, the price
jumped to $80 before experiencing a constant decline to identical
Correct article usage
an identical
price
at $35 on Tuesday
of the second week
, where it remained unchanged until Thursday. Finally
, the price
of an airplane ticket rose up
again to $50 Change preposition
apply
at the end
of the period.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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