The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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chart

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illustrate what

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the

reasion

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reason

the public of

traveling

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travelling

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were

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was

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traveling

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travelling

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and the main problem in the United States in 2009.

Overall

, it can be seen bar chart was

Reasion

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Reason

for

travel

was the

higgest

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highest

biggest

, it was To and from work. Meanwhile, Friends or Relatives was the lowest

figure

Moreover

, The pie chart shows that of Price of

travel

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apply

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was the biggest the amount of

Main

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the Main

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issues for the

traveling

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public.

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, Space for pedestrians was the lowest

figure

. Look at

details

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for

travel

starting

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the biggest

figure

, Toa and from work was at point 49 per

cent

followed by Personal

Reasion

at 19 per

cent

and

then

Shoping was 16 per

cent

. The

last

, Social or

Recriation

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Recreation

and Visit friends or Relatives were the lowest

figure

under 11 per

cent

In addition

, Pie

char

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discribes

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describes

main

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the main

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issues for

traveling

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the traveling

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public, Price of

travel

was the

higgest

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highest

biggest

the amount of percentage at 36 % following Safety

concern

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concerns

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had

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apply

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at 19 per

cent

Once

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And

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Aggresive

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Aggressive

drivers was 17%. After that, Highway congestion, Access to public

tranports

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transports

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and space for pedestrians were under 15 per

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Vocabulary: Replace the words reasion, travel, figure, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

189 words

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

Some people believe that every human being can create art (e.g. poetry, music, paintings). Other people think art can only be created by people born with a special ability. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, managers and team leaders in many organizations and companies are much younger compared to the past. What are the reasons for it? Is it positive or negative development?

task 2: both men and women these days work full-time, so it is logical for them to share household chores equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?