The diagram give information about changes in a student accommodation
The maps illustrate a student
accommodation
prior to and following it
redevelopment.Change the pronoun
its
Overall
,the most significant changes at the student accommodation
have been the addition of three rooms,a social area, and a car parking
Replace the word
park
while
no modifications have been made to the remaining facilities.
Looking at the student accommodation
in 2010,it had garden
on either side of the Add an article
a garden
accommodation
.According to
the plan,the garrden
to the north of Correct your spelling
garden
accommodation
has remained the same Correct article usage
the accommodation
while
the garden to the southSubmitted by [email protected] on
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