The world has been an enormous increase in flight for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?. Do you think flights should be taxed more?

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Whether there is a rapid growth in the number of international

flights

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for

lieusure

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leisure

licensure

, business and

cmmercial

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commercial

purpose

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purposes

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which

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apply

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the advantages

outweight

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outweigh

the disadvantages.

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, his writer strongly believes that

flights

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should not be taxed more. The main benefit of

hese

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these

flights

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is that they shorten

time

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the time

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moving

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of moving

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long

distance

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distances

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high speed, planes are able to travel

hundred

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a hundred

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kilometers

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kilometres

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with

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within

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an hour.

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, people now prioritize

to take

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taking

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flights

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to travel between different countries.

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, making a flight is a good choice

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avoid time wasting.

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, it is believed that international

flights

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are so expensive that many

poeple

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people

can not

afford

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afford them

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is because planes'

servieces

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services

require a lot of money to run,

meanwhile

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the average salaries of

ordianry

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ordinary

workers are not high.

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may be true but

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flights

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agencies now offer

sitable

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suitable

stable

prices for

ormal

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normal

formal

guests.

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, there

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still a big increase in global

flights

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the

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apply

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recent years.

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, it is not a good choice t put more tax on these

lfiths

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flights

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there are

such

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improvements

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flights

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flight

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services,

extra

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the extra

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fee

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apply

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will not

please

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meet

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the requirements of

customres

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customers

. Taking

USA

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the USA

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as an example, most of the

filts

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firms

operated in

this

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nation have

been

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apply

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low tax

fee

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fees

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, which

then

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enhanace

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enhance

enhances

the customers' experience.

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, it would be better to

appl

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apply

suitable

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a suitable

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additional fee for

flights

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. In conclusion, these

flights

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' advantages are much more considerable compared to

its

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their

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disadvantages.

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, it

wouldbe

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would be

better not

tax

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to tax

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Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

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for example
for instance
to illustrate this
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such as
namely
to illustrate
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

253 words

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The world has been an enormous increase in flight for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?. Do you think flights should be taxed more?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for the locals?

in many countries’ schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the cause (problems)of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays some professionals such as doctor, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries?

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