In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge of experience

When someone gets older in Britain, they usually will live

together with

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people

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who are their age and be taken

care

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of by nurses. The

government

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often has to pay for

this

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service. In my opinion, the

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that should pay for taking

care

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of older

people

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is their family, not the

government

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.

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is because the elderly are the family's

responsibility

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, not the

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's. First and foremost, the

one

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who should take the

responsibility

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of taking

care

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of the old family member is their own family. They should not give the task of taking

responsibility

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of

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their elder to the authority,

due to

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the fact that in the past it was

them that

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they who

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took

care

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of the family.

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, when the elders are still at a young age, they don’t neglect the

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to take

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of their family,

on the other hand

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, they are being responsible and make sure their family is convenient. In my view, taking

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of older family members is

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of many ways to pay respect to them.

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, the

government

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already has many responsibilities, so taking

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of

older

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the older

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population should not be their priority. Despite the fact that the citizens already paid the taxes and it could be used for services like paying nurses to take

care

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of older

people

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, I think it is better to use the tax money for something more useful to the community.

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, the authorities can use the funds to build free medical services, so that numerous

people

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can do free consultations for their health. In conclusion, the

one

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who should pay for taking

care

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of older

people

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is their own family.

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the fact that the

government

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still has many duties to be fulfilled, taking

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of the elderly is their family task.