The system used for rubbish or garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. It is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter with regard to
complaint
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about the garbage collection system in our resident area.
To begin
with,
this
concern is not only for me but
also
with my neighbours.We have been noticing that rubbish collecting trucks
are
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not coming on their scheduled timetable for
last
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one
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month.
Apart from
this
,those worker's behaviour was extremely rude
last
week,when I asked them to come on time.
Thus
,I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention
into
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this
matter.
Moreover
,we are always one step ahead
to put
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in putting
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dustbins out of our home for yard collection,
whereas
they do not arrive at a decided time and day which causes infections around our home and smells bad.
This
problem causes illness for children
,
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because there are many pupils playing there after school.
Lastly
,I would like to make a suggestion for
this
issue.Please
advice
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to
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the
department
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of garbage officers to make a suitable timetable for yard picking and monitor it
on
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regular intervals. We hope that you will address
this
concern as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Parthkumar
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Task Response
Consider adding more specific details about which days the rubbish collection trucks missed, this will add clarity to your argument.
Coherence/Cohesion
Ensure the letter begins with a clearer introduction to provide context for the following details.
Task Response
Pay attention to minor grammatical and lexical errors to enhance overall clarity and fluidity of your letter.
Greeting and Closing
The closing statement is polite and encourages prompt action, aligning well with the formal tone of the letter.
Logical Structure
The ideas are logically organized and each paragraph addresses a specific point, making the letter easy to follow.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rubbish collection schedule
  • overflow
  • accumulation
  • attracts pests
  • health hazards
  • unsightly appearance
  • foul odors
  • quality of life
  • reliable
  • frequent
  • community awareness programs
  • waste reduction
  • recycling
  • community composting solutions
  • organic waste
  • installation
  • public bins
  • strategic locations
  • littering
  • residential bins
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