The diagram below shows the lifecycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relavent.

The diagram below illustrates the lifecycles of

salmon

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large fish.

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, it can be seen those of three stages. The first one is egg

salmon

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which is lower

river

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fast slowing. The

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process

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salmon

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becoming

adult

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. They

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from one

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.

Salmon

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egg

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which

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are laid

small

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in small

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stone and the base of reeds, the development

are

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approximately five to six

month

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that

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is under

river

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slowing-moving.

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the

process

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salmon

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of salmon

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lower

river

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which is fast-flowing to

River

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flow

average

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approximately 4 years. The second

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salmon

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growing to become smolt

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is at 12 to 15

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previously at 3 to 8

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. They are growing from agg into fry.

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last

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process

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salmon

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moves to the ocean where they mature into

adult

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which average seventy to seventy-six

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long.

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they spend about five years there. After that they

migration

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upstream to their birthplace and

entire

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journey is

repetition

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all over again.