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THE TABLE BELOW GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT THE AVERAGE AMOUNT OF MONEY SPENT BY FANS OF FIVE SCOTLAND FOOTBALL CLUBS ON TWO TYPES OF FOODS AND DRINK IN 2018 AND 2023.

THE TABLE BELOW GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT THE AVERAGE AMOUNT OF MONEY SPENT BY FANS OF FIVE SCOTLAND FOOTBALL CLUBS ON TWO TYPES OF FOODS AND DRINK IN 2018 AND 2023.
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REGARD
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 THE SPENDING ON FOOD AND BEVERAGES BY
SUPPORTERS
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 OF FIVE FOOTBALL CULBS IN SCOTLAND FROM 2018 TO 2023.
OVERALL
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, WITH
REGARDS
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REGARD
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 TO FOOD SPENDING ALL THE CLUBS SHOWED AN INCREASE WITH THE EXCEPTION OF
DUNFERMLINE
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 AND
FALKIRK
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.
ADDITIONALLY
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, IN TERMS OF DRINKS, ALL THE CLUBS DECREASED EXCEPT FOR AGAIN,
DUNFERMLINE
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 AND
FALKIRK
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.
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AGAIN.
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 BEGINNING WITH THE NUMBER OF FOOD IN YEAR
OF
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2018,
FALKIRK
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 WAS THE HIGHEST SPENDING WITH 39
POUNDS
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 FROM
SUPPORTERS
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 AND DECREASED AFTER THAT TO 28
POUNDS
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 IN 2023.
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,
DUNFERMLINE
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'S
SUPPORTERS
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 SPENT
ON
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36
POUNDS
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 OF
FOODS
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FOOD
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,
ALSO
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 IN 2018 IT WAS THE SECOND HIGHEST AFTER
FALKIRK
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. BY 2023, IT HAD DECREASED FROM 36
POUNDS
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 TO 29
POUNDS
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 AND WAS AT THE TOP SPENDING COMPARED TO OTHERS. TURNING TO THE DRINKING EXPENDITURE, IT CAN BE SEEN THAT THE SPENDING OF
FALKIRK
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'S
SUPPORTERS
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 MADE IT
BEING
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THE HIGHEST AMOUNT IN BOTH YEARS WHICH WAS 21
POUNDS
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 IN 2018 AND 22
POUNDS
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 IN 2023. FOLLOWING THAT,
DUNFERMLINE
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 WAS THE SECOND HIGHEST THROUGH THE DURATION AND THE LOWEST SPENDING OF AIRDRIE BEING IN BOTH YEARS WHICH WAS JUST 9
POUNDS
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 AND 6
POUNDS
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, RESPECTIVELY.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words supporters, dunfermline, falkirk, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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