23.The chart below shows spending on health among three different countries between 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

23.The chart below shows spending on health among three different countries between 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart illustrates the amount of spending on a variety of goods in both countries, the UK and France, in the year 2010. The unit on the Y-axis is shown in pounds sterling.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the car is the main product making
profit
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a profit
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in the two countries the most
while
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the least in Great Britain is
perfume
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and in France are
cameras
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.
To begin
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with, looking at the United Kingdom, the expenditure
of
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cars occupied a gigantic 450,000 followed by books, which were an enormous 400,000. A slight difference was seen between computers and
cameras
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by approximately 1,000.
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,
perfume
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came in
last
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place with only a minuscule 140,000. What is interesting to note is that the cars were more than the
perfume
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by 3 times.
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, the total money
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vehicles in France still remained in first place as in the UK, with exactly a massive 400,000.
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, computers in Frace were seen to surpass the UK by 2,500
as well as
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perfume
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with 6,000;
besides
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, PCs and
cameras
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registered at a large 380,000 and a meagre 150,000 respectively. What is surprising to see is that the gap between books and
cameras
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was roughly 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words perfume, cameras with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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