Task 1 The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. And make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. And make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the different floor plans in a public library after 2 decades.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there progressive development of the rooms and facilities over the period.
Firstly
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, there were tables and chairs in the centre of the library, which have disappeared and become an empty
room
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along the hall from the entrance after 2 decades.
Furthermore
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, adult non-fiction
books
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have been filled with adult fiction
books
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with an Information desk and self-service machines are provided there. The children’s
books
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room
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also
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has
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been
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changed
a
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to a
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lecture
room
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and the Enquiry desk (tickets, book return,etc) next to the entrance has been constructed as a cafe. Turning to another area, the Reading
room
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’s (newspaper & magazine) door was removed next to the entrance and has been installed as a computer
room
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,
while
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Adult fiction
books
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next to
this
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room
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have been filled with all reference
books
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. Other developments were CDS, videos, and computer games were improved its size and established as a children’s fiction
books
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room
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to hold a storytelling event, where sofas are provided.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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