Task 1 The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. And make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram depicts the different floor plans in a public library after 2 decades.

Overall

, it can be seen that there progressive development of the rooms and facilities over the period.

Firstly

, there were tables and chairs in the centre of the library, which have disappeared and become an empty

room

along the hall from the entrance after 2 decades.

Furthermore

, adult non-fiction

books

have been filled with adult fiction

books

with an Information desk and self-service machines are provided there. The children’s

books

room

also

has

Add a missing verb

been

show examples

changed

Change preposition

to a

show examples

lecture

room

and the Enquiry desk (tickets, book return,etc) next to the entrance has been constructed as a cafe. Turning to another area, the Reading

room

’s (newspaper & magazine) door was removed next to the entrance and has been installed as a computer

room

while

Adult fiction

books

next to

this

room

have been filled with all reference

books

. Other developments were CDS, videos, and computer games were improved its size and established as a children’s fiction

books

room

to hold a storytelling event, where sofas are provided.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
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2Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

178 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

layout
modern technology
computer stations
multimedia room
multi-purpose spaces
conference rooms
study spaces
community-oriented services
accessibility
wider aisles
ramps
designated areas
people with disabilities
cafeteria
coffee shop
leisurely space

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Task 1 The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. And make comparisons where relevant.

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