The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Writing Task 1
The chart shows the
percentage
of Canadians using various social networking sites
in 2014 and 2015. Generally, there was a rise in the percentage
of people using one site
as compared to those without site
access, however
, the percentage
of society then
declined as the number of accessed sites
rose.
In 2014, more than a third of people used only one site
, followed by those who utilized two sites
by 23 per cent
and no sites
by 22 per cent
. The persons accessing at least 3 sites
were only almost one-fifth combined, with more than half the joint percentage
contributed from 3 sites
. Nevertheless
, the number of societies obtaining 3 or more sites
increased in the following year with a joint proportion of 28 per cent
. The most significant rise was seen in the users with 3 sites
with a 4 per cent
increase. In contrast
, the one site
users dropped abruptly to 28% in 2015 and persons with zero accessed sites
slightly decreased by 1 per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, sites, site, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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