the diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power.

the diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power.
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water producing
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process
by
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using
solar
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a solar
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power system.
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, it is a complicated process
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with collecting sunlight and
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at
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filling
water
into a container to transport to
marketplace
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. The procedure
begin
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with a solar panel which is a specific
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gadget
gadgt
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gadget
used to
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absorb
absorded
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absorb
sunlight to
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storage
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solar energy.
Then
, a converter is located above the ground to transfer the power to create electricity that
operate
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the pump
that is
put inside the underground
water
. The step after that,
water
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which is pumped with flow through a specific tube to transmit and fill out a
watertank
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water tank
that
put
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higher than the ground on the wooden platform.
Subsequently
,
water
is filtered by a specialized system in the tank
that
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with a pipe to poor drinking
water
outside. A tap is arranged on the tube to manage the flow that
let
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the purified
water
to
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pour
to
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the movable container that will be transmitted into market stock
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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