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The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given illustration compares five different
nations
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 in terms of the number of their film productions commencing from 2007 until 2009.
Overall
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, it can be observed that there was an increase in the number of
films
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 released in all
nations
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whereas
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 a reverse trend was observed in countries A and E.
Additionally
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, despite a gradual decline,
country
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 A still remained
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the most prolific producer among all five
nations
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 throughout the period of 3 years. Regarding the two
nations
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 experiencing more film production per year than other
nations
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,
country
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 A started at nearly 90
films
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 made in 2007
while
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this
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 trend continuously remained in the following year prior to seeing a gradual decrease to exactly 80% by 2009. Meanwhile,
country
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 B released around 48
films
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 to the public before making a moderate rise to end the period at 70
films
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. Turning the focus towards the other three
nations
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, almost 20
films
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 were made by
country
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 C in 2009 which doubled its number in the two previous years. In the meantime,
country
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 D fell down from around 16
films
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 to exactly 10
films
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 in 2008 prior to making a recovery back to almost 15
films
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 in the next year. Concurrently,
country
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 E had a modest production of 10
films
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 in 2007, which increased slightly to 11
films
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 by the end of 2009.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words nations, films, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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