The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one coutry, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.
The given line graph shows the details of public vehicle users who lived in large cities or
surburbs
in the same country by 2016.
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suburbs
Overall
, it can be seen that both locations had a percentage of user
which was less than when they got older. Fix the agreement mistake
users
Additionally
, at
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in
31
-45 Correct article usage
the 31
aged
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age
group
the gap between 2
places was bigger than others.
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the 2
To begin
with the figure for 0-15,61-75 and 76 or over age bracket. With the youngest group
, a
number of Correct article usage
the
uses
who lived in large Correct your spelling
users
city
was 40% ,which was approximately double the figure for the young from Fix the agreement mistake
cities
other area
. Regarding Change the wording
another area
other areas
older
age Correct article usage
the older
group
, there are 10% of citizens
in outside cities and nearly 20% of citizens
in megacities in 61
-75 age bracket.Correct article usage
the 61
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, at
the oldest Change preposition
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group
of citizens
where had nealy
10% of far way centre of Correct your spelling
nearly
city
and 15% of Add an article
the city
urban
centre.
Turning to the remaining three other groups,where the disparities were significantly bigger.In reference to individuals Add an article
the urban
an urban
who
aged between 31-45 , Correct pronoun usage
apply
citiy
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city
outskirt's
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outskirts
citizens
had 15% in usage transports
which was noticeably fewer than about 65% of urban Fix the agreement mistake
transport
residences
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residents
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, the Replace the word
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group
of adult dwellers which had the rate of growing city
individuals was over 50% compared with nearly 30% of surburb
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suburb
populances
.The final Correct your spelling
populaces
group
is middle-aged
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the middle-aged
group
, urban city
citizens
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Vocabulary: Replace the words group, city, citizens with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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