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The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.

The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.
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The given bar chart gives the
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information
 about the
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 of
students
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 in six different countries of
a
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US universities in 2010.
Overall
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, it can be seen that finance was the major that had
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students
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,
while
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 engineering had the lowest. It can
also
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 be observed that mathematics had the biggest difference between the
number
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 of male and female
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. Looking at the chart in
further
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details
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, the
number
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 of female marketing
students
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 was at 125 , compared to male
students
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 with about 75 people. The
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 of accounting female and male
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 was
at
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200 and 175, respectively.
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 , there was an equal
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 of female and male
student
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students
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 in finance which was at around 230
students
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. Turning to the
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 majors of the university , there were 200 male
students
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 in mathematics , which was far more than female
students
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. In terms of engineering , just slightly more than 50
students
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in
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 both sexes joined
this
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subjects
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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