The table below shows the results of a survey of first year students taking various courses at a particular university.It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course very good.

The table below shows the results of a survey of first year students taking various courses at a particular university.It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course very good.
The given table compares the
percentage
of various types of courses which were done by first-year
students
and well-established.
Overall
,it is clear
students
of
commerce
can easily cope with all types of courses,
while
this
percentage
falls over time among the
students
of
law
As the table reveals ,the highest
percentage
in
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information was done by the
students
of
commerce
which showed 95% compared with 55%,and 72% among
students
of
economics
and
law
,respectively.Regarding teaching quality,
economics
and
commerce
revealed the same point 95%,in turn.
While
this
sharp was just 67%in
Law
.
However
,the smallest proportion of tutor support was in
Law
at 79%,and nearly 92% for
economics
and 93% for the
students
of trade.
By contrast
,
commerce
reached a peak with 81% in resources.
Nevertheless
,
this
figure was just 59 %among
economics
,and around 70%for
Law
.
However
,
students
of
Law
and trade gave the approximately same
percentage
80% and 86%,respectively.
In addition
,
economics
reached 62% of
this
.
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