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The table below shows the results of a survey of first year students taking various courses at a particular university.It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course very good.

The table below shows the results of a survey of first year students taking various courses at a particular university.It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course very good.
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The given table compares the
percentage
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 of various types of courses which were done by first-year
students
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 and well-established.
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,it is clear
students
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 of
commerce
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 can easily cope with all types of courses,
while
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this
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percentage
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 falls over time among the
students
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 of
law
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 As the table reveals ,the highest
percentage
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 in
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 information was done by the
students
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 of
commerce
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 which showed 95% compared with 55%,and 72% among
students
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 of
economics
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 and
law
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,respectively.Regarding teaching quality,
economics
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 and
commerce
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 revealed the same point 95%,in turn.
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this
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 sharp was just 67%in
Law
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.
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,the smallest proportion of tutor support was in
Law
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 at 79%,and nearly 92% for
economics
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 and 93% for the
students
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 of trade.
By contrast
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,
commerce
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 reached a peak with 81% in resources.
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,
this
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 figure was just 59 %among
economics
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,and around 70%for
Law
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.
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,
students
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 of
Law
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 and trade gave the approximately same
percentage
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 80% and 86%,respectively.
In addition
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,
economics
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 reached 62% of
this
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, students, commerce, law, economics with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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